Traduction en anglais de mes futures vacances

Bonjour, d'abord, attention : en français, au futur, première personne du singulier, il n'y a pas de " s " final ; sinon, c'est un conditionnel. Donc, il faut écrire : " j'irai, je ferai, je mangerai ", etc. Cela dit, voici une tentative de traduction en anglais : « Hello, today I'm going to explain to you the proceedings of my summer holiday. I'll go to Dubai by plane from 1 July to 1 August with mother, father, sister and brother. I have already an idea of all activities I'll practise : diving, boating ; I'll go to the beach, to the pool, shopping ; I'll eat every day in restaurant and I'll visit as many places as possible. Then, I'll go to the sea by car from Tuesday 6 August to Monday 12 August with grandma, sister, brother and a girlfriend ; over there, I'll have walks on the beach, eat ice creams, go cycling and make sand castles. From Tuesday 13 August, I'll stay at home ; I'll take advantage of the opportunity to reread my lessons, to see friends and girlfriends, to change the decoration of my bedroom and to enjoy fine weather. There you go, I have displayed my schedule for this summer ; thanks for attentiveness. »